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Aidan
01-18-2005, 10:43 AM
i did this is 10 mins. i think it's an improvement on my previous drawings! <IMG SRC="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v622/aidanlynch1/MPVsketch1.bmp" BORDER="0"> people ,i need feedback! <IMG NAME="icon" SRC="http://images.zeroforum.com/smile/emthdown.gif" BORDER="0"> <IMG NAME="icon" SRC="http://images.zeroforum.com/smile/emthup.gif" BORDER="0"> ?<BR><BR>
<i>Modified by aidanlynch1 at 12:06 PM 1/18/2005</i>

SV
01-18-2005, 04:01 PM
sorry, but i don't think it's an improvement over your best works. the styling, to me, is a little bland at the front, and you really need to work on perspective (i suggest spending AT LEAST 30 minutes on your drawings). one major thing is that the windshield should be parallel with the rest of the front of the car. overall you've got tons of potential though, your lines are clean too; just work on those proportions.

taskbearer
01-18-2005, 04:30 PM
yrp. SV3 said it already....perspectives..perspectives..perspective s. for improving ur perspective, try drawing 3D boxes and try carving ur design details out of it much in the same way as carving out of a block of wood.

dezigNergy
01-18-2005, 05:02 PM
Looks pretty good. Just keep practicing man, you will eventually get there if you practice. Look for tutorials on how to draw prespective etc. From that angle the centre line (which runs through the front grill) should be further to the left. The right headlamp shouldn't be seen from this angle. Keep it up mate.<p>:)

KaRaceR
01-19-2005, 11:04 AM
loks cool man i wish i could draw somthing like that in 30 minutes let alone 10minutes

whipster
01-19-2005, 02:41 PM
Taskbearer gives you a very good way to draw a good perspective. There are many more:<br>- use mirror - just look at your drawing through the mirror and you will see many things that are wrong<br>- use compass to copy "strategic points" of real photographs<br>Explore <A HREF="http://www.cardesignnews.com" TARGET="_blank">http://www.cardesignnews.com</A> you will find tutorials there