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Toxic
12-22-2004, 03:40 PM
Orig.<br><IMG SRC="http://img63.exs.cx/img63/1893/p31301069aj.jpg" BORDER="0"> <p>and my sketch of the same thing(to work on perspective and stuff) <br><IMG SRC="http://img63.exs.cx/img63/133/dsc019583hn.jpg" BORDER="0">

SV
12-22-2004, 03:45 PM
well the main problem is that the wheels are too small and far apart. try and enlarge them a bit; oh yeah, and the C-pillar should end at the back of the rear wheel too.

Snake Vargas
12-22-2004, 05:10 PM
Not too bad, but it seems that you're putting a bit more of the front and back of the car on view than should be. Maybe try to draw just what you can see, don't worry about drawing what you 'think'.<p>Keep on practicing, it'll come along! <IMG NAME="icon" SRC="http://images.zeroforum.com/smile/emthup.gif" BORDER="0">

whipster
12-23-2004, 03:52 AM
improvement exists, but still gotta work

VexedandGlorious
12-23-2004, 04:31 PM
you gotta make smooth curving lines, it looks as though your trying too hard, you perspective is great, butyou gotta work on the rear.

hollc004
12-24-2004, 05:44 AM
loosen you hand when you draw. It makes for much smoother lighter lines. If you allow you hand to loosen it allows you to adapt the picture if you make a mistake and makes for easier running out. Looks kool though well done man

mwkmn
12-24-2004, 06:19 AM
Perspective is *kinda* there, but I think you need to work more on the rear.