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whipster
12-31-2004, 11:18 AM
There is a plenty of toons on our forum recently, so why not to add another one? <IMG NAME="icon" SRC="http://www.germancarfans.com/images/forums/biggrin.gif" BORDER="0"> This is my thing:<p><IMG SRC="http://img125.exs.cx/img125/3404/rx8toon0rf.jpg" BORDER="0"><p>I know I know, many things to improve, but well, that's my first toon!

kid
12-31-2004, 11:20 AM
for a first its great...it just looks blotchy..use the line to to do all the details and then fill in with the brush too...<p>look for moorhouse for a tutorial

Player4
12-31-2004, 11:59 AM
Hey dats really kool!!! looks very toony! lol<p>gr8 job!

JBlair
12-31-2004, 12:58 PM
Try working on smoothing all of your lines (make smaller segments when you have curves), and it will be great!

hollc004
12-31-2004, 03:54 PM
Hey it looks sweet :) I agree that you should make the lines smoother. I like the use of the thick line around the top of the roof line. Its a great achivment for a first ever well done mate, I wish my first one looked that good

whipster
01-01-2005, 05:47 AM
Thanks for comments m8s! <IMG NAME="icon" SRC="http://www.germancarfans.com/images/forums/beerchug.gif" BORDER="0">

NOM15
01-01-2005, 08:06 AM
I agree with everyone else, it's very good for a first toon. As said it does look very toony (which is a good thing). Work on the lines and you'll be a toon-master in no time <IMG NAME="icon" SRC="http://www.germancarfans.com/images/forums/beerchug.gif" BORDER="0">